tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.comments2023-11-15T14:04:03.456+05:30Diet SamosaVipul Groverhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14759165630549569179noreply@blogger.comBlogger1979125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-75703789824094193582020-07-28T04:10:03.077+05:302020-07-28T04:10:03.077+05:30Thanks Pratibha and Aura... Strange circumstances ...Thanks Pratibha and Aura... Strange circumstances indeed, which are testing each aspect of our physical and mental well-being.Vipul Groverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14759165630549569179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-39166566092785214012020-07-27T21:41:55.739+05:302020-07-27T21:41:55.739+05:30Very well expressed post . I think we can blame th...Very well expressed post . I think we can blame this virus as it has changed the circumstances and we are just responding to it in different ways. Keep writing! Dr. Pratibha Singhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16551548865707335224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-58341884161233525782020-07-27T07:17:03.157+05:302020-07-27T07:17:03.157+05:30Lines are very well framed, these times are surely...Lines are very well framed, these times are surely testing people integrity and patience Aura Of Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13843187816044813530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-44323981352656331462020-07-27T02:20:08.271+05:302020-07-27T02:20:08.271+05:30Hey Simran, thanks. I am an expert in sad endings....Hey Simran, thanks. I am an expert in sad endings. Couldn't help :) Vipul Groverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14759165630549569179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-89606876562427105672020-07-27T02:18:59.388+05:302020-07-27T02:18:59.388+05:30Haha... Sahi bola :) Haha... Sahi bola :) Vipul Groverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14759165630549569179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-38333794022719758772020-07-26T22:36:41.424+05:302020-07-26T22:36:41.424+05:30Achcha post likha tha isliye gaya vapis padhne. Ac...Achcha post likha tha isliye gaya vapis padhne. Achcha nahi likhte toh chances kam the :) Kshitij KK Khuranahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15188895602887528293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-13776438778897106392020-07-26T21:18:45.278+05:302020-07-26T21:18:45.278+05:30I wish the girl hadn't given up so easily :(
...I wish the girl hadn't given up so easily :(<br /><br />I could actually feel the pain while reading this. So very well written!<br /><br />Cheers! :)Simranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01931908983809822868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-75319225847262734652020-07-26T05:05:55.486+05:302020-07-26T05:05:55.486+05:30Oh siddie boy, I am happy you liked it. You have b...Oh siddie boy, I am happy you liked it. You have been one honest critic always. Vipul Groverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14759165630549569179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-81674859186321635002020-07-26T05:05:06.740+05:302020-07-26T05:05:06.740+05:30Pavil, great to have you back. Marshal has his own...Pavil, great to have you back. Marshal has his own big shoes to fill each time he participates... Sorry for going into third person mode ;) Vipul Groverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14759165630549569179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-54130165824628133882020-07-26T05:02:08.550+05:302020-07-26T05:02:08.550+05:30Thanks Shri. In fact, I feel you did complete just...Thanks Shri. In fact, I feel you did complete justice to the theme in your story. Thanks for the kind words. Vipul Groverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14759165630549569179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-85603349495095347572020-07-25T21:45:52.112+05:302020-07-25T21:45:52.112+05:30Lockdown unlocking a bond between two people was a...Lockdown unlocking a bond between two people was a take i thought about, but simply couldnt have done such justice to it. Its a real pain to bear. Unknown Shrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10115098583905661324noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-27593617883643056732020-07-25T09:02:40.689+05:302020-07-25T09:02:40.689+05:30Very strong emotional story and written in marshal...Very strong emotional story and written in marshall-esque way :-) Pavilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10101956425144957746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-28124649458600575642020-07-24T16:46:52.084+05:302020-07-24T16:46:52.084+05:30Bhai bhai bhai, that was an emotional and painful ...Bhai bhai bhai, that was an emotional and painful journey. Very nice, VipulSiddhesh Kabehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05949517024873104589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-84189629734363439342020-07-24T15:35:00.676+05:302020-07-24T15:35:00.676+05:30Thanks Chetan, these are stories of so many people...Thanks Chetan, these are stories of so many people around us. We've been hearing about them every day. Just tried to piece together a tale from what all is going around. As a writer, I am happy that it made you feel sad (you know what I mean, right). Vipul Groverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14759165630549569179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-69418865680863903632020-07-24T00:23:38.896+05:302020-07-24T00:23:38.896+05:30Hi Vipul
I waz feeling sad at the end, and that ex...Hi Vipul<br />I waz feeling sad at the end, and that explains how beautifully you portrayed that emotion...the skill that every writer needs....layoffs, breakups/divorces, domestic violence ...we are reading daily about it...very much relatable to today's scenario...<br />Best wishesChetan Maheshwarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15425014456182686808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-32273804378102221602020-07-23T21:52:30.847+05:302020-07-23T21:52:30.847+05:30Thanks Smita... You put it right; it is painful in...Thanks Smita... You put it right; it is painful in many (varied) ways to all of us.Vipul Groverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14759165630549569179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-24305475664819094952020-07-23T21:49:35.614+05:302020-07-23T21:49:35.614+05:30Tanaya (factfiction)... Thanks for your kind words...Tanaya (factfiction)... Thanks for your kind words. I have already read your story and left my feedback there.Vipul Groverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14759165630549569179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-1322250534117318072020-07-23T21:44:58.013+05:302020-07-23T21:44:58.013+05:30Savita ji, as I replied to Sarav, these are painfu...Savita ji, as I replied to Sarav, these are painful times indeed. Let's hope for the best and remain prepared for the worst.Vipul Groverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14759165630549569179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-58505315159306221442020-07-23T21:44:00.202+05:302020-07-23T21:44:00.202+05:30Sarav, thanks. Well, these are painful times. And ...Sarav, thanks. Well, these are painful times. And no one knows how long it will go like this. Let's hope for the best and remain prepared for the worst. Vipul Groverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14759165630549569179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-49037346427267431572020-07-23T21:43:24.518+05:302020-07-23T21:43:24.518+05:30Kshitij, your comment brought such joy. Well, you ...Kshitij, your comment brought such joy. Well, you actually went back to the introductory poem. That was my intention all along — to leave clues about that poem throughout the story. Thanks for making that effort. You are not just a good writer but a thoughtful reader too.Vipul Groverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14759165630549569179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-75895240596701516112020-07-23T21:43:06.387+05:302020-07-23T21:43:06.387+05:30Swati, thanks a lot. I was just trying to bring ou...Swati, thanks a lot. I was just trying to bring out all those shades of the lockdown. I am happy you liked it.Vipul Groverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14759165630549569179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-34390867614955345832020-07-23T21:42:10.693+05:302020-07-23T21:42:10.693+05:30Cherry Blossom, while lockdown is helping some peo...Cherry Blossom, while lockdown is helping some people come closer and strengthening relationships, such stories of heartbreaks — as you put it — must also be the truth for many. That's what I was attempting here on basis of things actually happening around me (such as layoffs). Thanks for the lovely comment.Vipul Groverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14759165630549569179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-35113212628387978772020-07-23T21:41:53.787+05:302020-07-23T21:41:53.787+05:30Megha, I really enjoyed trying this new form of wr...Megha, I really enjoyed trying this new form of writing. Lyrical seems an apt description. Thanks a lot, and all the best to you too.Vipul Groverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14759165630549569179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-48021480466589200782020-07-23T11:44:42.153+05:302020-07-23T11:44:42.153+05:30Tugs at heart and touches a forgotten corner of th...Tugs at heart and touches a forgotten corner of the memory. Simply beautiful....And I have fixed my blog...If you are still interested in reading it, I would love to have your feedback. the factfictionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06676989097057485947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34288441.post-13940407382423930822020-07-23T00:24:49.151+05:302020-07-23T00:24:49.151+05:30This has emotions flowing through it ! Very well e...This has emotions flowing through it ! Very well expressed. This pandemic is painful in many ways to many people Smitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10654769386438619894noreply@blogger.com